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作者：英语网 （字数：600字）
小升初考试作文：字数60-80 20分
[要求必须用短语; If 虚拟语气;形比高同;现在完成.]
Beijing is changing
Every body knows that Beijing is changing. From buildings to the public transportation, everything is changing. And Beijing is becoming better and better. Last year, Beijing has hold the 2008 Olympic Games successfully and has become the focus of the world.
Beijing change is inevitable, because China is developing, and the world is developing.
The better Beijing changes, the better china changes. Yesterday, the president of U.S.A has come to visit Beijing, that means Beijing has is developed better than before. If one day I have a chance, I will develop Beijing to be the best city in the world!
老师评语：
文章很好，所需语法点全部有!而且文章很有深度!这样写就可以得高分!好!继续努力!
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